Halloween is all about Boo!!! I think your story is very good as I got scared when I read it. The door mysteriously opened... that would give anyone a fright!
Halloween is always supposed to be scary. In every sentence of your story there is always something mysterious and that makes the reader want to read more. When I read your third sentence, I kept on wondering what would happen next.
I love your reasons!
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ReplyDeleteHalloween is all about Boo!!! I think your story is very good as I got scared when I read it. The door mysteriously opened...
ReplyDeletethat would give anyone a fright!
Halloween is always supposed to be scary. In every sentence of your story there is always something mysterious and that makes the reader want to read more. When I read your third sentence, I kept on wondering what would happen next.
ReplyDeleteWell done Jess!
A bit freaky!
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try take a closer photo next time
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