Good building of suspense on the trailer. Music is superb for this. The first palaeontologist was easy to understand & had good facts. The second palaeontologist is very happy! Is the third palaeontologist going to say anything? Sharing the presentation of facts shows viewers there is a definite collaboration & all three palaeontologists know their stuff. Lastly think about how you are going to end the presentation. Looking forward to seeing the finished work. Sheli Smith
Good building of suspense on the trailer. Music is superb for this. The first palaeontologist was easy to understand & had good facts. The second palaeontologist is very happy! Is the third palaeontologist going to say anything? Sharing the presentation of facts shows viewers there is a definite collaboration & all three palaeontologists know their stuff. Lastly think about how you are going to end the presentation. Looking forward to seeing the finished work.
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Thankyou. next time we will try and make it a better ending and more INFO
DeleteTeina Ben and Aiden
too quiet it needs to be louder by autumn and holly
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