Monday, 25 February 2013

ethan witing

this is my witing I hope you like my story

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5 comments:

  1. D Mossop28 February 2013 at 16:52

    I like the way you use your senses in this writing Ethan. Smells are important when we describe things around us. Well done!

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  2. Anonymous19 March 2013 at 13:46

    I liked your descripshons Ethan.Daniel

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  3. Anonymous19 March 2013 at 13:50

    Exciting words Ethan,it makes your story better.Sam.p

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  4. Anonymous19 March 2013 at 13:53

    Exciting words Ethan,it makes your story better.Sam.p

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  5. Anonymous16 June 2013 at 19:22

    Tidy writing Ethan.Daniel

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