Monday, 25 February 2013

the secret place

my name is isobel and this is my story about the gally hope you like it




5 comments:

  1. Isobel, our school gully is wonderful...places for insects to live and to hide from the birds who might want to eat them along with imaginery creatures and people. Your long story has lots of powerful imagery and is delightful to read.

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  2. I love your descripsions Isobel.Daniel

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  3. Is it seacrt.connor

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  4. I like how you emplyed in your story.cherry

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  5. Nice writing Isobel.Its a pretty cool story.from Hudson.

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