Monday, 18 March 2013

England pen pals

We are writing to our england pen pals. Have I included enough information? By Abbie.

9 comments:

  1. that is the best and coolest witing in the world I wold love to see more of this Abbie ethan

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  2. Yes Abbie I think you have done heaps of information.Ethan

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  3. You have done a great job of including information about yourself, but also asking questions about your pen pals. It would be great if you could include what our uniform looks like.

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  4. Looks cool Abbie I love your writing From your big brother Josh

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  5. Great editing! Editing helps make no mistakes in publishing, Abbie!
    Alex Rm23

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  6. Nice writing.Nathaniel

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  7. Awsome writing Abbie ! Katelyn

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  8. I love your witing From your nana

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