Monday, 25 March 2013

Gully senses.

My work is about gully sense.from Daniel

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6 comments:

  1. Anonymous25 March 2013 at 13:39

    I like it Daniel.nathaniel

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  2. Anonymous29 March 2013 at 23:21

    Good adjectives. cherry

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  3. Anonymous1 April 2013 at 12:58

    Your writing is amazing Daniel! Remember to use these or other descriptions in other pieces of writing you do, okay?
    Alex

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  4. Anonymous7 April 2013 at 00:12

    I really enjoyed reading your story Daniel..I liked the way you described what you could see and feel and smell and likened it to a cat...Im very proud of you Daniel...XX Nana

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  5. Anonymous11 April 2013 at 00:49

    I love your descriptions, I could really imagine being in the gully with you.
    Do you think the cicadas and birds enjoyed having you there with them?
    Mum

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  6. Anonymous5 May 2013 at 19:28

    I liked my own work.From Daniel

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