Wednesday, 13 March 2013

Gully Senses

We went down to the school gully and we were thinking about senses using descriptive words.
By Olivia

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6 comments:

  1. Room 513 March 2013 at 14:16

    Wow Olivia I love all your amazing descriptive language! Mr F

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  2. Anonymous14 March 2013 at 00:21

    Wow Olivia ! I loved reading your story it made me fell like I was in the gully! Olivia's mum.

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  3. Anonymous21 March 2013 at 14:04

    I like your tidy writing Olivia.Daniel

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  4. Anonymous21 March 2013 at 14:10

    now I can rember it thaks to.Ethan

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  5. Anonymous15 May 2013 at 19:43

    I did ok with my story i did my editing wrong.I wrote I feel nice soft grass rubbing against feel my feet :[
    olivia

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  6. Anonymous19 May 2013 at 15:12

    i actually think your writin' is pretty good.
    alex

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