Sunday, 24 March 2013

If I was the President

Please tell me what I can do to make it more interesting
By Jessica



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14 comments:

  1. Anonymous25 March 2013 at 22:22

    You might want to give some adjectives and sentence starters. cherry

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  2. Anonymous27 March 2013 at 13:57

    I want a puppy so when can you be presedint
    Isobel

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  3. Anonymous1 April 2013 at 13:03

    You might want to use some similes Jessica
    Alex

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    1. cherry16 April 2013 at 01:28

      After all, similes are pretty important and can get hard to use.

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  4. Anonymous8 April 2013 at 19:08

    Love your writing LANE

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  5. Anonymous8 April 2013 at 19:09

    Love it.From Hudson.

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  6. Anonymous8 April 2013 at 19:17

    nice jess .try to make it a bit longer connor

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  7. Anonymous10 April 2013 at 19:47

    I love your idea,Jessica.hudson

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  8. Anonymous15 April 2013 at 00:31

    your free choice writing is absolutely amazing jess!just another topic. cherry

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  9. Anonymous3 May 2013 at 14:27

    I agree on the allergies. Abbie

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  10. Anonymous13 May 2013 at 19:09

    I really wished I was presedint. nathaniel

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  11. Cherry15 May 2013 at 23:11

    It would be pretty cool to be the president

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  12. connor5 June 2013 at 14:51

    when are you president.

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  13. Anonymous16 June 2013 at 19:27

    Mabey you could yous exciting words

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